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I feel I am being held captive,
Like a beautiful bird in a small iron cage.
I feel a red hot anger within me,
Like a crazy bull in a blind rage.

I feel I am in constant, spinning turmoil,
Like a delicate butterfly in a swirling tornado.
I feel as though I am lost in limbo,
Like a condemned angel without a halo.

Then it passes,
And a tinkling sound fills the room,
Kind of like good friends toasting,
Gently banging each others' glasses.
I was really bored while at my dad's auction this evening so I wrote this dwon in my sketch book.

One of my poems that I ACTUALLY like.

We raised about $800 at the auction and it is all going towards cancer research so, WOOO!

Anywho, enjoy!

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EDIT: I changed the picture as I don't know the owner of the first one.
EDIT2: Preview by PurpleDragonFlie5
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:iconthatcatchance:
I don't get how this stuff is popular other than the fact that DA got money. I would think my stuff is great but no one sees it, and if it isn't, tear it apart so I learn. Anyways, I'm not gonna give DA money. I'm just gonna rebel and post links on premium, popular-for-no-discernable-reason works.

this is my favorite and will blow your socks off. [link]
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aka "trolololol give me pageviews"
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yzkethrag Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That is one trippy picture. 8D
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:iconsakinaliak:
I do love me some trippy pictures.

but it does kinda kill my eyes after a while
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yzkethrag Jul 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It kinda gives off an ache in eye, yes.
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scarecrow-kid Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist
This is a lovely poem, but please give credit to the watercolor artwork which you have used. :heart:
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:iconsakinaliak:
I actually don't know who the author of the artwork is, so tell me if you want me to take it down. :)
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scarecrow-kid Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist
Mmm, well just putting that/replacing the artwork with something of yours is fine. :] I'm not sure about the rules of art + literature collab submissions, but it's good practice to make sure that you don't accidentally take credit for a piece by stating right off the bat who the author/artist is of which. I think your poems would stand out very well if you had an accompanying photo or artwork done by you that relates to the poem. Keep up your writing, okay? It's got a nice ring to it!
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:iconsakinaliak:
Thanks! I'll come up with something better later *sheepish*, one day, when I have time.
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